Presentation feedback and Improving work

In yesterday's class, we presented our work to our peers, filling in some feedback forms. Here are the answers I got from my classmates Sara and Paula.

 1.Did everyone understand what your project was about? 

Yes, everyone understood the theme and concept.

2.Did your peers think that you had good initial ideas and research?

Yes, because of the amount of research I showed, the mountain and valley method and the sketches I did.

3.Did your peers feel that you were challenging yourself?

Yes, because of all the thinks I am trying to learn about regarding fashion buying. But they did not find challenging enough my objective of learning how to use issuu and Indesign.

4.Did they think you had good research throughout? If not why not and what could you improve?

They think I have done enough research about Pull & Bear but I should finish my post on Jeremy Scott

5. What other feedback did you get that you found useful?

Nothing else

6.Overall do you think you presented the work well? If not, why not?

No, I was not ready to present it and very nervous, so I believe I might have presented it out of order or in a very unorganised way.

Here is the infographic I did with Visme: